Time And Its Ability to Persuade
Rachel Young
In the world, there exists a man-made concept that holds the
power to control space. It defines the changes in the world and provides a mean
to quantify subjects of an unquantifiable nature. It is not tangible, nor is it
easily described, but we are acutely aware of its affect on our beings. This
entity can be harnessed, molded, emphasized or deemphasized to fit a specific
need… and it does so in an incredibly effective way. The entity of which I
speak is ‘time.’ As we humans go through schooling, we learn about the world in
context of time- through world history and presidential terms, through life
cycles and chemical reactions. Our own lives are delicately connected to the
concept of time- many people are acutely aware of a perceived lack of time, when concerning their own
existences. Time is a multi-faceted subject, which touches everyone, everything
and everywhere.
Time has an extraordinary power. We, as humans, are so
incredibly attentive to its existence that sometimes we discredit the power we
have over it- that we have the ability to change ourselves in the present and
that we can affect the future. Time also has an incredible power over us-
references to past occurrences often have the ability to elicit intense
emotions. This ability of time, to give immediacy to our claims and give us an
intimate awareness of the subject at hand, has not remained untapped. In
documentaries, news castings, blogs, as well as other types of media, time has
been utilized to create audiences and to give their stories focus… which
creates a very successful model for presenting information.
This model changes in the field of public discourse. Public
figures address a variety of subjects, all of which touches people in
infinitely different way- every audience member has their own specific context,
and it is hard to frame an subject in a way that interests a multitude of
people at once, and a large audience is necessary if there is to be a
distinctive change in the public… a small audience usually won’t cut in this
area of largely debated issues and historical challenges. Time is one of few
things that affects most everyone the same way, an emphasis on the immediacy of
a topic can spark interest in a subject that was ignore before. Moreover,
appealing to time does not only help create an audience. Public discourse has
an aim to do more than just inform a mass audience. If public discourse is to
be effective, it not only needs to work within the stases of value and policy,
but furthermore, moving the audience to act. Otherwise, there will be no public
change. If there is no resulting change in the audience, the discourse may as
well have never occurred. Time has the ability to change all of this.
There are an indeterminate ways to appeal to the
all-too-human concern for time, but for all intents and purposes, I limit
myself to just two: a focus on the present and a focus on the past. I have two
examples of public discourse which use either of these appeals, and it aim to
discover just how the use of time can affect an audience so much so, that they
elect to change their own lives as a result.
In the midst of a vicious presidential battle between Barack
Obama and John Mccain, one speech rose above all the rest. It is now fondly
referred to as “the race speech,” and addressed topics that were pertinent to
Obama’s candidacy. Obama spoke to show the public that a vote for his
presidency was a vote against racism. He spoke to demonstrate how a ‘more
perfect union’ was possible. Mostly, he spoke to show people how racism affects
their everyday lives, and how they have the power to change it. Knowing this,
it is not surprising that Obama situated his speech in the present and future.
It is clear that Obama’s speech addresses an issue about
‘misunderstandings of each other’s intended frame of reference in making
certain statements’- Kaufer’s level II argument. Obama acknowledges this, quite
matter-of-factly, when he says “They've {Caucasians} worked hard all their
lives, many times only to see their jobs shipped overseas…when they are told to
bus their children to a school across town; when they hear that an African
American is getting an advantage in landing a good job or a spot in a good
college because of an injustice that they themselves never committed.” Each
person involved in racism only sees it from their point of view and through a
lens of selfishness, without bothering to think how it might affect the other
faction. This issue is inherently situated in the present, as a constant
decision that is made every day. Obama goes on to explain how focus on each
specific issue that comes along won’t fix the problem of racism. A solution to
racism exists in understanding others’ problems and respecting them as much as
your own. This is why Obama puts so much emphasis on the man who was “there for
Ashley.”
Obama does not completely disregard past events- in fact, he
references them quite often. He references slavery, possibly the most notorious
example of racism in history. Obama touches on the issue of Reverend Wright and
his racist comments, which created a public uproar. Obama speaks of his own
past, with a mother from Kansas and a father from Kenya. He also speaks of
Ashley Baia, who’s mother filed for bankruptcy after she had to undergo
treatment for cancer. Obama brings up these personal anecdotes not to focus on
the past, but to highlight the immediacy of this issue. These stories show how
the problem of racism is very much in the present. He uses to them to bolster
the idea of a corrupt present- that this problem is unchanging. It brings racism
to the attention of the audience by portraying it in these intimate settings.
Obama brings it all together by describing that the ends of these stories are
the beginnings of a new, stronger union. But he always brings it back to the urgency of
present.
President Obama further situates this issue in the present
and future by becoming quite visionary; he describes America’s potential,
speaks of the results of the future election, and talks about how it is
everyone’s wish for a union where everyone is treated with equal respect. Obama
creates these lofty ideals, but then brings his audience back to reality: these
ideals are not possible without realizing the problems of today. Obama explains
how closely these are involved by saying “…It also means binding our particular
grievances - for better health care, and better schools, and better jobs - to
the larger aspirations of all Americans -- the white woman struggling to break
the glass ceiling, the white man whose been laid off, the immigrant trying to
feed his family.” It makes these goals seem attainable to his audience… by
changing your mindset (as well as voting for Obama), a ‘more perfect union’ is
possible. It makes it real.
The issue of racism provides an interesting juxtaposition
between a crisis in the present and a potentially racism-free future: it is an
issue that needs time to be resolved, but cannot begin without present action
from the audience. This sense of urgency, that it is a crisis of the present as
well as the future, helps move the audience to action. For an audience who is
ultimately short sighted, Obama acknowledges their ability to change the
future. This is where Obama’s appeal to time really shines: By thoroughly
demonstrating how personal action can extend past the present, he creates yet
another reason for the audience to take action. ‘If not now, when?’ his race
speech echoes ‘Racism is a problem affecting people now, and you can stop it.
Now we move to another example of public discourse: Robert
Bullards lecture on ‘race response’. Robert Bullard’s discourse is on a very
similar subject matter to that of Obama’s, but provides a more focused issue.
Bullard speaks of how different races were treated differently in the wake of
natural disasters, such as hurricanes. He wastes no time, explaining how there
is a difference in the lack of care in issues that affect both Caucasians and
African-Americans. This already lends his claim some immediacy- if Dr. Bullard
doesn’t want his issue to be watered down by unnecessary context. That will be
provided later in his lecture.
A majority of Bullard’s lecture is situated in the past. He
cites instances such as Hurricane Betsy, where waste from the disaster zone was
placed in an African-American neighborhood, significantly impacting their ability
to recover from the disaster. Bullard speaks at lengths about the governmental
assistance received by impoverished/black areas, but provides only facts and
information. There is a lack of prophetical statements about what could happen-
and instead focuses on the trials and tribulations that people of race have
experienced. This could be because
Bullard’s subject is a level 3 argument, that “we give decisive weight to
different evidence.” The privileged society may need the hurricane debris gone
so that they can function, but underprivileged people could do without a toxic
Superfund site in the middle of their neighborhood so they can recover. Both
have their own views of what is important, taking into account the evidence
that is presented to them. Bullard, quite obviously, believes that the
injustice done to these underprivileged people outweighs the inhibitions that
Caucasians would experience by finding an alternative means to manage waste.
Furthermore, Bullard does not bother connecting these past
events to the present. He very clearly desires for it to be recognized that
these events occurred through the history of America. “This is 1965” he says,
repeating this and other dates at least 5 more times in his lecture- there is
no mistaking his wish to for use to acknowledge the magnitude of these past events. A focus on the past events
does, however, help him to create a sense of fear- the past cannot be changed,
and harbors a distrust of the government. Bullard ignores a chance to give his
argument a sense of urgency by showing that environmental racism is happening
today and action needs to be taken. In fact, he barely mentions the idea of
changing governmental policy at all.
Bullard’s desire to incite action is inherent in the fact
that he is creating a public discourse, as opposed to any other rhetorical
medium that would be more informational. He fails to make this obvious to the
audience, or to provide them the means for action. Why would he appear to do
himself a disservice?
The approach taken by Bullard to address this issue is
actually quite clever. It is similar to
Jone’s description of the Enthymeme and Syllogism- he provides a major premise
(the concept of environmental racism) and a minor premise (examples of
environmental racism) but leaves the audience without a conclusion. The
audience then, themselves, must come to a conclusion; whether or not they take
action against this issue. For this, Bullard relies on a strong send of ethos
and logos to carry his argument but offers no pathos to rouse emotions or a
sense of time. It is more this reason that I believe Bullard desires a
specific, informed audience- with the knowledge to comprehend that
environmental racism is an imminent problem and the ability to make a change. His
audience may be smaller, but they will be more inclined to take action- and the
solution he proposed, albeit silently, requires a higher level of dedication
than simply casting a vote. In this way, a focus on the past assures Bullard a
small group of highly dedicated individuals who are grounded in solid facts and
an unchanging past.
The differences in time between the two examples of
discourse I provided are both blatant and nuanced. For the most apart, it boils
down to the needs of the issue and the needs of the audience. The issues
undertaken by each rhetor elicit a need from the discourse- whether that be
blanket statements about the nature of America (vestiges of the arguments
involving misunderstandings and value, levels 2, 4 and 5) or very specific
anecdotes of how the US governmental failed in the face of disaster (called
into existence by levels 1 and 3). Appealing to time, as one of the most
intimate way to affect the human condition, can be both emphasized and
deemphasized to have a similarly strong effect.
How it is used depends of the nature of the issue you, Obama or Bullard
are trying to change.
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